WIP

This one isn't staying up, just so you know. It's a project for my portfolio class, due tomorrow. BUT I need major help. So please please please, whether you know me or not, drop in a few suggestions or observations and I'll be your bazooka.

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EDIT: Thank you everyone for your suggestions! I changed a few things before I turned it in, and was going to keep working on it, but guess what. My computer DIED. So I had this WIP backed up and saved on an external hard drive, but not the new version, and that kind of made me want to pull my whiskers out. And it's too depressing to go and redo all the changes I made, so I've decided to let this one slide.

More sadness: the laptop I'm using (which doesn't even have Photoshop, by the way) is really bright and it makes all my art look terrible.